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PostSubject: Shakesperian Sonnet   Sat Jan 09, 2010 11:46 pm

i got top in my year (out of 200 students) for this poem a couple of years back, it recieved full marks which no other student recieved, i worked for days on it though to perfect it, so enjoy.

Wind blows, through the leaves, it whispers your name
You stand still, all alone in the darkness
You feel unable to move, almost lame
The urge to run grows, from this loneliness
Yet your feet feel frozen, glued to the spot
A cold and lasting chill runs up your spine
You want to escape, escape from the lot
Longing for warmth, the thing that you most pine
Thinking of that place you once knew as home
And of a warm touch, a hug or a kiss
Here you know that you are all alone
But you are very certain that you know this
In your heart and mind they’ll forever stay
People you love, they never go away.

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PostSubject: Re: Shakesperian Sonnet   Sun Feb 07, 2010 5:52 am

beautiful

nuff said

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PostSubject: Re: Shakesperian Sonnet   Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:46 pm

Jellie, that's so awesome! You could be a successfull writer

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PostSubject: Re: Shakesperian Sonnet   Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:53 pm

Pity i dropped out of school ey?

I'm going to start again via distance education, but i had really big problems with stress....

Thanks for the critique guys.

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